Hey I forgot a part where Edmund meets the queen for the first time, when he was following Lucy,Zafira and Johnny. So please let's pretend he did okay! Thanks!
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(3rd person P.O.V)
Peter,Susan,Edmund,Zafira,Lucy and Johnny were all walking and laughing like they never had before. They were having a good time until Lucy noticed Mr tomnus front house door bented and she gasps and runs towards the house.
( Zafira's P.O.V)
I saw mr tomnus door bented and before I gasp Lucy ran towards the house.
Peter : LUCY!!!
he rans behind Lucy. Soon we all followed and went in the house to see mr tomnus house trash with books on the floor ripped off,the picture of his father shattered , everthing scratch and ripped
Lucy : Who would do this? * with tears falling from her cheeks*
Johnny went to hug her and said
Johnny: I don't know Lu but will find him* kissing her forehead*
Lucy smiled sadly
Susan : hey what's this?
There was a piece of paper pinned on the tree ( it's the one in the picture)
Peter : who ever these humans was, got mr tomnus in trouble
Lucy : Don't you get it Peter!! Zafira,Johnny and I are the humans maybe she saw us with mr tomnus and besides she isn't the real queen of narnia, she thinks she got the power of this land. We have to find mr tomnus!
Susan : No! Lucy we can't, we have to get back to the wardrobe were in enough trouble as it is!
Me : I'm with Lucy , mr tomnus is our friend and he needs us if we don't find him he'll die!
Peter : I wish I could help but we can't were not getting in to trouble
Then we saw a bird fly past us and went outside. Peter follow it first, then Susan,Lucy,Johnny, Me and Edmund. I noticed Edmund being quite today he's never this quiet
Me : Edmund your alright? You seem quite
Edmund: Wha? Oh yeah I'm fine don't worry about it it's nothing
I looked at him and saw the he was lying but I left it at that. We were looking for the bird until we heard a twig snap
Lucy: what was that?* whispering*
We heard another one, but that one was louder and closer to us. We all scooted closer to each other Peter was holding Susan,Johnny was Holding Lucy and Edmund was holding me, which he was warm and cozy. We kept hearing it until we walked forward and saw that it was just a beaver. We relaxed and Peter made it towards the beaver with his hands sticking out like he was some dog that wants to pet it.
Peter : Here boy ! (making a sound in his mouth) tsk tsk tsk Here boy !
The beaver looked at Peter like he was crazy and then talked it TALKED!!!
Beaver: well I ain't smelling it if that's what you think!
Everyone widen their eyed except for me, I just giggled cause it was funny
Beaver: Lucy Pevensie
Lucy was surprised that it knew her name
Lucy: Yes
he gave her the Hankey She gave to mr tomnus
Lucy :this was the tissue I gave to- * he cut her out*
Beaver : yes mr tomnus , he is a good friend
Me: he was captured by the white witch beaver we have to help him
Beaver : I know that's why I'm here to help you but you need to come with me at my place to talk, there watching everywhere come on.
Then he hops down the hill.
Then Peter starts following the beaver
Susan : Peter! What are you doing?
Peter : he knows where's the faun is, he's Lucy,Zafira and Johnny's friends we have to help him even though I said no earlier
Susan : he's a beaver he shouldn't been saying anything!!
Peter shrugged his shoulder and kept walking. Lucy and Johnny followed next then Susan. Edmund stared at me with a small smile and grab my hands.
Edmund: your so beautiful * kissed my forehead * come on before we get lost
Me : okay:)
I smiled back and follow everyone to beaver's house
