So sometimes when I'm writing this better version of YouNow, I have To go back and read the other one...
OH MY GOD IM CRINGING. CAN I JUST TALK ABOUT IT?!?!
1 ) when in my right mind did I think that it was okay for this bitch to wear leggings on the 24/7?!?! THATS NOT OKAY.
2 ) The whole hickey thing was just messed up. And by messed up I mean you have to SUCK on the neck. Jesus Christ! { i figured that out the hard way... you can probably guess how. JUST call me little Virgin Mary. I'm like 16 but okay }
3 ) THIS BITCH CRIES A LOT! OMFG IDEK HOW YOU GUYS PUT UP WITH IT
4 ) MY grammar overall SUCKED ASS.
5 ) THE STORY ITSELF SUCKS. WHY DID YOU PEOPLE EVEN READ IT?!?! SHES SO ANNOYING. I PROMISE SHE WONT BE ANNOYING IN THIS ONE BC OMFG.
Okay. Love you guys. New update coming soon, pinky promise(:
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YouNow ; blake gray { RE-WRITTEN ONE }
Fanfiction* the re-written version to the original book : YouNow *