Cinderella (Feedback)

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Cinderella is a charming story about a woman learning to trust and love again in a world that's not always forgiving. I'm a bit of a fairy tale geek. I've read more than my fair share of the "original" fairy tales as well as their modern re-tellings, and the Cinderella archetype is a particular favorite of mine.

This story, I'm happy to say, does not follow the western idea of what a Cinderella story should be. The bones are there, but the author makes this story her own. Nothing is in your face and abrasive.

The characters are very relatable to me, and seem so real and down to earth. Sigh... I want a Paul, but I'll just have to settle for reading about him. I find it very refreshing to have these kinds of characters in new reading material. The writing style was lovely, and for English being her second language, was very well written!

Would I read more? Absolutely!

~Dandi

I only read a few chapters but I like what I have read so far

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I only read a few chapters but I like what I have read so far. The story is well written and I like the characters. Probably my favorite thing in it so far is Tessa and Ava's friendship. Paul seems like a really likable guy too and I liked how sweet he was. I do think that they kissed a little bit too quickly, but that's just a personal preference. Overall I think you did a really good job!

~Medula

I truly love this series! Every book so far has been beautifully written

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I truly love this series! Every book so far has been beautifully written. All the characters in your modern day fairytales are so much more relatable than the originals.

I really loved how Tess was so different from the previous two women MC's. A lot more introverted and shy compared to your first two books. I found myself rooting for her within the first few chapters!

Like your others, this book is beautifully written. Each chapter flows nicely and makes it easy to keep reading along.

The entire series is something I would gladly pay for on iBooks or Amazon. Keep up the awesome work, and great job on another lovely modern day fairytale!

~Callie

~Callie

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