The Note

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Bummer title I know, but I'm in the process of writing a new, edited version of this story where all the plot holes are filed and my readers don't keep falling into them

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Bummer title I know, but I'm in the process of writing a new, edited version of this story where all the plot holes are filed and my readers don't keep falling into them.

Also, I'm trying to make May seem a little more human so that everyone who keeps talking about how easily forgiving she is at the beginning of the story will stop. Be nice y'all. Get to the end of the story before judging it.

The story sequence has changed and I've added about 6+ chapters to the book, and so the story makes more sense

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The story sequence has changed and I've added about 6+ chapters to the book, and so the story makes more sense. The first draft of this story was written when I was in high school and I was in a hurry to finish it so there were a lot of grammar mistakes, loose strings and of course plot holes. It was also extremely cheesy and less murderous than I wanted it to be. I've changed that a bit. Also, since I've already started Jason's story I felt like he seems like a flat character in this book, and so I've given him more scenes. Yay!

I hope you love Jason and Ryan's dynamic as much as I do.

I'm almost done with the edits (only the last two-three chapters are left) so I'll probably finish the story by the end of this week. Fingers crossed.

Don't worry, this time I will first finish the story and then begin posting so that the story will have a steady update schedule. To reassure you guys I'll type the schedule down and publish it after I take the book down. It's probably going to be a chapter every other day.

I'll be taking this story down on Thursday, March 14th, 2019 and start reposting it on the Friday, March 15th, 2019.

Let's hope I stick to my schedule.

I also am searching for a graphic artist for some graphics that I want for my books. If anyone has any good suggestions, or would like to nominate themselves (I don't bite) please let me know in the comments.

 If anyone has any good suggestions, or would like to nominate themselves (I don't bite) please let me know in the comments

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Love you my little fishies,
(Imagine if I said this in Victor's voice lol),

Love you my little fishies, (Imagine if I said this in Victor's voice lol),

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HR(Wells)

Side note: The Joker from the Dark Knight is the greatest villain of all time.

Side note: The Joker from the Dark Knight is the greatest villain of all time

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