Part 16

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2 days later,

Naira is much better now. She walks with just a slight limp. It's a lazy Saturday morning, its Kartik's day off. He wakes up late and walks to the drawing room. He sees Naira in a tensed mood looking at her laptop.

Kartik: good morning....subah subah padhaai? Come on its Saturday..aajke din toh tumhare microbes ko break do..

Naira: main padh nahi rahi hoon..

Kartik (sits with a thud): Whattt? Tum padh nahi rahi ho? Toh kya dekh rahi ho? She hides the screen. Kartik pulls the laptop and keeps it on his lap.

Kartik (looking through the list): Yeh kya? Saare M se shuru hone waale names hain....Mahira, Mahima, Mitra....whats all this?

Naira (biting nails): Kal gudiyaa ka naam karan hai..aur yeh responsibility meri hai..main bua hoon naa..Bhabhi ne M shabd se naam rakhne kaha hai...kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai..

Kartik : Main bhi help karta hoon..aakhir mera bhi haq hai...kuch rishta hai naa hamaara..

Naira : Rishta? Kiska?

Kartik(looking into her eyes): Mera..tumhara..hum dono kaa...

Naira continues to stare into his brown eyes, she finds her reflection in his orbs. He breaks into a cute smile.

Kartik: arre tum meri girlfriend ki bua ho naa....Buaajiii...he touches her toes. She retracts them.

Kartik: arre aashirwaad le raha hoon....Naira hits him. Kartik goes to make his coffee. He comes back and sees Naira chewing the pen, thinking hard. He goes slowly to her back and smiles as she adds some more names to the list.

Kartik: tum sirf ek bache ka naam karan kar rahi ho yaa poore hospital ke babies ka karna hai...tumhari list toh never ending hai..

Naira: Shut up.....tumne abhi kaha naa tumhari girlfriend hai naa gudiyaa..toh tum bhi help karo ...Kartik sits next to her and picks the laptop from her.

Kartik (making face): Mahira, Mishaa, Maahi, Mahima, Malala, Malaika...Naira is lost in his side profile as he screws his nose for some name or laughs..

Kartik: Inme se ek bi naam meri Mihika ko suit nahi karta hai...

Naira : Mihika?

Kartik: Hmm...dekho gudiya ko...uska chehra kitna shaant hai, masoom hai...usse dekhkar mujhe dew drops ki yaad aati hai..small, sweet and pure...Mihika ka meaning hi mist, dew hai..

Naira: wow.......Mihika....Bhai bahut khush honge...

Later,

Keerti: Wow....Nairaa...mujhe bahut pasand aaya naam – Mihika....acha yeh naam tume soojha kaise?

Naira (happy): waise yeh naam maine nahi..Kartik ne suggest kiya. She doesn't realise but she is blushing.

Naksh (raise eyebrows): Kartik ne? usne kyun kiya?

Naira: woh..main..aise hi names dekh rahi thi..toh usne aise hi yeh naam suggest kiya..aur..aur mujhe bhi acha laga....koi..koi problem hai kya Bhai?

Naksh: Nahi..aise koi problem nahi hai..mujhe bhi yeh naam bahut acha laga...magar...

Naira: Magar kya Bhai..

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