The Hot chocolate Book Review Center(Closed for good)
Table of contents

    YOU ARE READING

    The Hot chocolate Book Review Center(Closed for good)

    Random

    I review books and try help give you feedback on your books and how you can improve them.

    #bookreviews #fun #improvement #writing

    Review# 63

    40 6 2 
                                        
    
                                              
    Glory of who we were by: PoisonAshes
    Requested by: PoisonAshes
    
                          
    I found the plot of the story quite interesting and sad at the same time. Probably due to the fact, that people were dying in the first chapters but at least it sets up for the rest of the story and how they got to whatever it is that they're going to. 
    
                          
    There wasn't a lot of grammar errors, so I would recommend fixing them. 
    
                          
    Overall, it's a great story and totally recommend it to anyone who is interested in reading it.
    
                          
    Thanks for letting me review your book.
    
                          
    -Traveler_lilly
    The Hot chocolate Book Review Center(Closed for good)Where stories live. Discover now