Grendition: the rise of the shadows by: amyrobinNZ
Requested by: amyrobinNZ
I loved the cover of your book. I think it fits the overall theme of your story very well and it definitely drew me in when I first clicked on it to read it.
The pacing I felt like was good and it definitely helped introduces the characters to me and how they met and begin to hate each other and how the magic system works.
I also like the world building and magic system, it's actually done well in my opinion. You slowly get to know the world and like I said how the magic system while diving into the plot of the story which I actually enjoy reading about.
Plus I also like the main characters. They seem to have lots of character to them and they don't bore me whatsoever.
Plus I didn't see any grammar errors in your book.
Overall, it's a good story and would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.
-Traveler_lilly
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