I don't know why I feel that I wrote this story in rough unlike me I want to rewrite this story what do you guys think???
Story if read it again it felt like I just pasted some random thoughts into it conversations are worst story line is imperfect everything is left half way
I felt as if it's not my own story so I am trying to write it again
Give me your views please I am waiting
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Manan one mistake
FanfictionAll over the room is dark.Manik is trying to open his eyes but they are burning still he is struggling With great difficulty he opened his eyes found a pale face of Nandini sleeping in his arms. He smiled hugged her more for which she hissed Manik...
