I wrote this story when I was 14 years old and hadn't read the books and was going off of the movies purely. Now I am 20 and honestly extremely disappointed in my writing style. I don't think I like where this book is going so I am going to leave it up and give you guys more chapters as a closing and then I am going to write a new story where she will still have a baby but it won't be so lovey dovey. I like Dauntless for its brutalness and strength and I feel like I have accidentally taken that out of this story. I would love to hear from any readers that enjoyed this book so I can take a few parts with me.
Lela
VOUS LISEZ
Divergent! With our baby!
FanfictionFirst fanfiction! So Tris got over her seventh fear a month before Tobias choosing ceremony. Will he choose to leave? What will happen when they reunite? Will he want to be the father? Sorry I'm really bad at summaries!
