[TATTLETAIL COMIC] Chapter Two: Open the Box

84 7 0
                                    

Despite everything rough going on, I decided to at least put down some good things. I don't have the art for this comic at all, but I have the scripts, so I'll be publishing that

It may be incomprehensible but..... whatever

CAST:
Don
Tattletail
Richard

[LOADING...]

[December 20, 1998
5 Days Until Christmas]

*Scene: BEDROOM*

[Eyes: Asleep. Eyes: Awake]

[Don sits up in bed. Alarm clock reads 12:00 AM]

[Don looks to alarm]

[and smiles]
*Task: Open your Christmas present early

*CUT TO: Scene: HALLWAY (view from Kitchen, basement door visible)*
[D peeks out room]

[Sneaks to basement door]

*CUT TO: Scene: basement stairs (kitchen)*
[Don swings around stair banister to basement HALLWAY]

[Wide view of MAIN AREA basement. Don in foreground as silhouette]

[med shot of Don, smiles]

*CUT TO: scene: PRESENTS AREA*

[main area Light illuminating the dark room, showing where D will enter from]

[D pops into view]

[Closeup of Don with a smug grin]
D: Jackpot

[Present Area glowing by overhead light. Empty boxes and wrapping paper litters the scene.

[closeup of D's present]

[D's hands grab present, opening box]

[closeup of D's face as he unwraps present]

[closeup of tattletail]
T: Tattletail! That's me! Me love you!

[Closeup of D; no expression]

[he smiles; excited]
D: Heck yeah!

[D stepping out of PRESENT AREA into MAIN AREA, tattletail demanding to be fed]
*Task: Feed Tattletail
D: Mom actual got you! Awesome! This is going to be so much fun!

[three-part panel:
*Task: Feed Tattletail
D by fridge feeding T a carrot
T: Nomnomnom!
*Task: Brush Tattletail
D brushing T on couch
T:Brrrush me! Brrrush me!
D: Okay, okay! Calm down!
*Task: Put Tattletail Away
T: Yawn...
D: Me too, buddy. Me too]

*BASEMENT STAIRS*

[D looking down BASEMENT HALLWAY, kitchen light illuminating him]

[opp view still in dark]
D: That's weird...
T: (it's dark...)

*PRESENT AREA*
[D wrapping T back up]
D: There you go buddy

*MAIN AREA*
[D walks out PA]
*Task: Go Back to bed
D: Well that was something...

*BASEMENT STAIRS*
[side view. D walks up stairs. Phone ringing audible]

*KITCHEN*
[R looking at ringing phone]

[R looks at D out of frame]
D: Dick?
R: Phone's ringing

[med view facing front kitchen, front door visible. D shifts uncomfortably]
D: What?
R: Phone's ringing
D: No, I know that. What are you doing up?
R: Phone woke me up

[D in foreground; points to door]
D: Okay, then, shouldn't we go back to bed?
R: It could be my mom
D: Or it could be a stranger. Who calls in the middle of the night?

[closeup Don; looking away]
D: Don't answer. It's a bad idea and my mom is asleep. Let's just go back to be—

[R grabs phone]
D: RICHARD!

[R closeup on phone]
R: Hey, what's popping?

[STATIC. R drops phone in shock]

[Side view. R covers his ears as D runs over to put phone up]
D: [says something in shock]!

[mid-closeup D slams phone back on wall while R covers his ears]
D: What was that?
R: WHAT?

[Hallway view, looking at kitchen. D and R head back to bedroom]
D: Nevermind. Let's just get back to bed

[Front door is open]
D: Wait...
R: Did you leave the door open?
D: No. You?

[D and R outside front door in door frame]
R: When would I have had the time to open the door when I was answering the phone?
D: Okay, then who left it open?
R: Why do you think I would know?

[d and r walk away]
D: Let's just go back to bed

[LOADING...]

New Book of Random NSC stuffWhere stories live. Discover now