Likes/Dislikes: The description to your story is very creative and well written. It got my attention right away and made me want to read your story. I like your story so far, and it is very creative. I can’t wait to read more. I hope Florian and Alexandra get together. I don't really have anything suggestions for you other than going back and looking over your chapters for the few grammar mistakes you had in your story.
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Likes/Dislikes: I liked a lot of the thoughts and quotes you shared in your book. I think you should add in your description if the thoughts and quotes are your own. It would make it clearer if these are yours or someone else’s. I think this should also be stated in the chapters or in the first chapter if these are yours or not. And if they are not, then make sure to give people credit for their own.
Likes/Dislikes: I liked a lot of the quotes that you had chosen to share. Many of them did make me smile when I read them. My suggestion to you is to find out the owner of the quotes and state that in each chapter. If they are not your own quotes then you should be stating whose they are. And if any of them are yours, then you should state that too.
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