Review: Title, cover, description, boom boom boom amazing, spectacular, superb. The plot was very strong and I loved the creativity. Your character development was off the charts, I felt bad I couldn't give more than the max number. Grammar was almost all there, and I really, really enjoyed it. It was the mystery/thriller I was looking for. Great job!
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Review:The story was overall good and interesting.The grammar was good and you described the characters amazingly.I didn’t see any issues. Keep on the good work.
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I absolutely loved this story. The serial killer in this book seems pretty disgusting and a total psychopath which makes this mystery more dangerous and fascinating.
The thing I wanted to discuss was the first two chapters. Now don't get me wrong I did love the story but I feel like the first two chapters were quite long with the same thing repeating and the events changing in them was quite confusing that I had to read it twice to get what was going on. Things like these can really throw off the reader, it could be that there's an error of judgment on my side but that's how I felt while reading the first chapters.
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