Review: Okay, I absoluetly LOVED this book. Your title and cover were eye catching, and if I were to see this in a Barnes and Noble I would definitely buy it just to have a good cover to look at. And the title was perfection. The plot was great, and I really love how you are bringing awareness to so many problems in this world. I haven't seen anything like it on wattpad. Grammar was almost perfect, and maybe try to lengthen the bottom part of the blurb. Those are the only criticisms I would give. Am I allowed to praise this much as a judge? I don't care, you deserve it!
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REVIEW: That first chapter is just insanely detailed and i love it. It’s different, it’s striking and your descriptions are amazing. Well done. There a few little grammatical errors. I would only use one exclamation point - you tend to use loads at once and it makes it look unprofessional. You use a lot of ellipsis as well which distracts the reader and makes it slower paced. The plot is fantastic and intriguing, and totally original. I love it. Your characterisation is lovely. Your descriptions are amazing as well - really detailed and i can feel and see everything. Well done! The first chapter sets the scene so well, and it’s so hooking! Overall: a really intriguing and hooking story. With just a bit of polishing and editing this would be close to a book I can see in a book shop! Well done!
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Review: I really liked your cover and title, which were both very original. The description wasn't great, but it wasn't bad either. I liked your plot although it wasn't something I would read by myself. It was original, and the character development was great. A few grammar errors here and there so I would suggest going back and editing those. Overall, keep up the great work!
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