Likes/Dislikes: I really loved your poem! Your structure of the poem was nicely set up. I loved how you added sound into your poem. I would have loved to have seen more senses in it. That is something you could think about for future poems you may write.You had only a few grammar mistakes so there is not much to fix.
Likes/Dislikes: I liked all of your poems. They were very creative. I liked the styles you chose for each of your poems. You had only a few minor mistakes in your grammar, but everything else was good.
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Likes/Dislikes: Your poems have a lot of creativity in them, and I loved how the titles of your poems were in the poems themselves. You have a habit of always lowercasing the ‘I’ when it should always be capitalized. The only other thing that you should work on is dialogue. You had some dialogue mistakes in some of your poems.
Likes/Dislikes: I liked the poems and the themes of the poems. I would have loved to see some poems of yours with the five senses thrown in or more word choices or alliteration. Fix. And do word count starting at this paragraph.
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