Likes/Dislikes: I really like the cover. I really liked the opening to your story. It had me hooked and wanting to read more. The plot of the story is really good and I can’t wait to see what happens next. I really liked how you did not hold back on some of the gruesome scenes like when she pulled out the other vampire’s heart. It was unexpected and horrifying, but it made the story that much better. I also liked your use of vocabulary. My only suggestion to you is to revisit the chapters you have written and fix some of the grammar mistakes. There were some grammar mistakes, but not a whole lot.
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Likes/Dislikes: I am really enjoying the story so far. I have an overall view of what the story is about and there is a mystery to who Jacob and Sarah are. This makes the story more intriguing to read. I like how you go between the present day and flashbacks to the past. I think you could work a little more on your grammar. It was a few simple mistakes that you will need to go back and fix. I have gotten a sense of the characters and how each of them are as a person, but a few of them of the characters I didn’t know what they looked liked because you never gave a description of appearance. In one chapter you did, but you had said it at the end of the chapter, but said to check out the character aesthetic at the top of the page where you can insert images. For the future, I suggest working on character appearance more and making it clearer and stating in the beginning of the story what the characters look like. Otherwise, your story is great and I can’t wait to read more.
Comments: • What a beautiful book! I was excited to read this book as soon I noticed it was marked werewolf & LGBTQ+. It was a great story that wasn’t similar to any other books that I have read like it. A well written, non cliche story💜 The only critique I have is about the cover... It wasn’t giving me the mysterious vibes I was looking for to compliment the book.
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