LGBTQ RESULTS

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royejulian

Homecoming

Title and Cover: 10

Descriptions: 20

Plot: 20

Creativity: 10

Character Development: 10

Grammar: 19

Enjoyment: 10

Total: 99 out of 100

Judge’s Notes:

The story is well written and powerful. Character’s have strong dynamics and are described very well. The writing tone itself is addicting! There are slight grammar issues but a quick edit through the chapters should help. The openings of every chapter really pulls you in. Writer has an eye for details. I absolutely love the characters and found it hard to pull myself away from the book. I don’t have much to offer in the form of suggestions before the minor editing. Can’t wait to see more from Royejulian!

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lisa_london_

The Lion and the Falcon

Title and Cover: 7

Descriptions: 19

Plot: 19

Creativity: 8

Character Development: 10

Grammar: 16

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