Remarks: Honestly I really liked this book. The author's writing style is unique and the storyline is quite enjoyable. I really don't have many complaints about it, I probably would have enjoyed it more if some of the chapters were a bit longer but that's fine I guess. Overall a good job done!
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Character Development: 7/10. Though it was a short story, very short to be precise, your characters were brought about and shown really nicely. Something rare and I'm happy about.
Grammar: 15.5/20. Simple use of words but still neat and presented nicely, though there were minor mistakes. Kudos.
Enjoyment: 8/10. I really enjoyed your story. Keep it up.
Total: 74/100.
Overall review: An enticing story though little editing is needed. Good job.
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Title/cover: 6/10. Cover looks a little too dark. Title is appropriate.
Description: 14/20. Good descriptions.
Plot: 15/20.
Creativity: 7/10.
Character Development: 6/10. Your story was a sequel, so some things and characters were a little vague. I must commend the way you brought them about.
Grammar: 15/20. Though your vocabulary use was a tad too simple, the way you still kept it almost mistake free is commendable.
Enjoyment: 7.5/10.
Total: 70.5/100.
Overall review: good story. Well done.
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