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𝑀𝑦𝑠𝑡𝑒𝑟𝑦, 𝑇ℎ𝑟𝑖𝑙𝑙𝑒𝑟 𝑅𝑒𝑣𝑖𝑒𝑤

Judge: Brownieislove

The heaven and hell detective society by DetectiveWatson
Title- 5/5
Cover- 2/5
Story Description- 4/5
Prologue- 0/5
Grammar- 9/10
Plot- 9.5/10
Character development- 7/10
Flow- 3/5
Creativity- 5/5
My interest- 3/5
Overall opinion- 8/10
TOTAL- 55.5/75

Review- title is on point, giving perfect insight of the plot. Cover is good and all the things is going with the story but the blending is very off, can be improved as the names and subheading/title is also not clearly visible. Try adding a short prologue beforehand to give the vibe of the story. Blurb can be more descriptive and creative as the storyline is. Few grammar mistakes here and there. Plot is nice and very much original but the way of writing especially in the initial chapters is very disinteresting (first few chapters are really short). Couldn't see much character progress in any of them. Rest it's all good, nothing major which can't be changed.

P.S. please try not to repeat things many a times. (Just an advise)

Captivated by alphaholic
Title- 5/5
Cover- 5/5
Story description- 4.5/5
Prologue- 5/5
Grammar- 9/10
Plot- 9.5/10
Character development- 9/10
Flow- 4/5
Creativity- 5/5
My interest- 5/5
Overall opinion- 9/10
TOTAL- 70/75

Review- nice title and cover, going perfectly with the storyline. Description, started quite simple and seemed off but later become very intriguing and attractive. Full marks for the creativity and the extract, plot is really nice but the pace can be a little more up as the blurb gives a intriguing vibe to your story, but that part started after quite a some time so yet that can be improved. Few grammar errors, can be corrected easily (not the quotation before period thing thou). All in all the story was really interesting, nice work.

P.S. lol was the funniest thing I've read today, the whole camera thing was.

The legend of marmoris by El_Pa_Ca1601
Title- 5/5
Cover- 2.5/5
Story description- 4/5
Prologue- 0/5
Grammar- 9.5/10
Plot- 9/10
Character development- 10/10
Flow- 2/5
Creativity- 4/5
My interest- 4.5/5
Overall opinion- 9/10
TOTAL- 59.5/75

Review- title is really good, cover on the other hand doesn't describe the plot much, as readers can't depict anything from the cover (it can be unattractive). Description is good , but something is odd, feels like too much information and the way of writing isn't syncing. Try adding a prologue for better understanding. Plot it nice but the way of writing is very odd, it's unique but not interesting as there is no POVs, which is necessary at some points. Few grammar mistakes, can be corrected easily. Flow is not quite matching the blurb (you mentioned they will be solving some mystery but in the story they fell apart, till what I've read).

Riddles to be solved by priya_shady
Title- 5/5
Cover- 4/5
Story description- 5/5
Prologue- 5/5
Grammar- 9/10
Plot- 8.5/10
Character development- 7/10
Flow- 3/5
Creativity- 4.5/5
My interest- 4.5/5
Overall opinion- 9/10
TOTAL- 64.5/75

Review- really nice title and blurb, on point depicting the storyline nicely, cover is nice but can be improved to something more intriguing. Nice way of describing the story, the video prologue was super intriguing. Only few grammar errors, can be corrected easily. Like how you wrote the first chapter and then converted that in dream for the flow of the story, but later on you mixed up POVs that disrupted the way of writing. Character development is not quite seen till chapter 4-5, because of not enough details about both Anamika and Alex. Rest all is good. Keep it up with the good work.