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Judge: firexqueen

Not a Disney fairy tale by hsblisss
Creativity 3.5/5
Attractive 2/5
Extras in title 2.5/5
Length 2/5
Matching the genre/story 2/5
Overall 2.5/5
Your title is creative but you could have improved it. Rather than fantasy, it seems like a love story and you have a crown at the end which doesn't help. It's longer than casually a title is preferred. The "Disney fairy tale" isn't that attractive since it's more likely a casual love story.
Total 14.5/30

Retrouvaille by _starflies_
Creativity 5/5
Attractive 3.5/5
Extras in title 5/5
Length 5/5
Matching the genre/story 5/5
Overall 4.25/5
It's nice that you kind of play with different languages. I loved that. It's a one-word title that awakes curiosity. However, someone who knows French and don't like separation-reunion love stories, may not find it that attractive. In this case, it's your judge.
Total 27.75/30

Love of my life calls me dad by priyaxsidneet
Creativity 0.5/5
Attractive 0.25/5
Extras in title 0/5
Length 1/5
Matching the genre/story 2/5
Overall 0.25/5
The title on the first look seems weird. The subtitle of your cover clears it but you can't add it since the title is already too long. You have hearts and apostrophes in it which are completely unnecessary. It matches your story but not your genre, suspense.
Total 4/30

Light in my life of darkness by AMBER_0501
Creativity 2/5
Attractive 1/5
Extras in title 5/5
Length 3/5
Matching the genre/story 4/5
Overall 2/5
Your title portrays a "shining knight" like story and with that romance is rather portrayed than general fiction. You should think and give your title a new trial to make it more interesting.
Total 17/30

Her worth by Veiled_author
Creativity 2.5/5
Attractive 3/5
Extras in title 5/5
Length 5/5
Matching the genre/story 5/5
Overall 3.5/5
Your title is slightly common but still interesting. It matches your idea and your genre. It's neither too long nor too short so the length is perfect as well. Maybe you could change worth to a synonym and that would change a lot already.
Total 24/30

I'm sorry by prash_for_all
Creativity 0.25/5
Attractive 0.25/5
Extras in title 5/5
Length 5/5
Matching the genre/story 3/5
Overall 1/5
You should really consider another title than this. Unless you write Fanfictions, you're really not going to get far with this. It may suit the genre and two things are perfect but still, it's not at all attractive.
Total 14.5/30

Dharmasangini by Sanjanasen67
Creativity 4/5
Attractive 2.5/5
Extras in title 4/5
Length 5/5
Matching the genre/story 5/5
Overall ⅗
Overall your title suits your story and isn't too long or too short. However, someone who doesn't have much knowledge about Mythology, won't know what all this is about. For them, it won't be attractive either that they would give it a try. A more common title could probably be helpful to you.
Total 23.5/30

Riddles to be solved by priya_shady
Creativity 2.5/5
Attractive 4/5
Extras in title 5/5
Length 2/5
Matching the genre/story 5/5
Overall 3/5
Your title completely fits your story but it also gives an impression of being too long. It's attractive but at the same time, it gives the impression that you summed up the story with 2 words. It's a small turndown because inside the story there's a bit more than the titles.
Total 21.5/30

I witnessed a murder by themysteryisme975
Creativity 1.5/5
Attractive 2/5
Extras in title 5/5
Length 1.5/5
Matching the genre/story 3/5
Overall 2/5
Your title doesn't seem attractive because you've taken the base of the story as a title. I have no idea what can be expected in the story. Rather than a mystery story, it seems like a story that will go around justice. The title doesn't manage to raise my expectations up enough, for reading it.
Total 15/30