Harry and Y/N potter

3 flash back & Getting a load of sweet!

A/N yes I forgot to say you are Snape's god daughter and Siris is Harry's god father. Back to it though

*Flash back*

 "Voldemort started to get some follows brought them over to the dark side"

"anyone who stood up to him ended up dead"

"your parents fought up against him"

"but nobody lived after he decided to kill them" 

"nobody not one except you two!"

*Flash back ends*

"Us" "Voldemort tried to kill us?" Harry started and I finished asking "Yes that ain't no ordinary cut on your forehead and on your neck twins, a mark like that only comes from being touched by a curse and an evil curse at that!" "What happened to us, to you know who" Harry asked "well some say he died. Codswallop, in my opinion. Nope, I reckon he's out there still to tired to carry on. But one thing's absolutely certain. Something about you two stumped him that night. that's why you're famous. That's why everybody knows your names. You're the twins who lived" after Hagrid had said that we were speechless and just couldn't stop thinking about it. We finished our food and went to be in a room Hagrid rented for the night. 

The next day we went to the train station and just as always Hagrid got a few strange he even asked what they were looking at to some of them. we were walking over a bridge connecting two platforms. Half was over the bridge Hagrid stopped to look at his pocket watch "Blimey, is that the time? Sorry, Harry and Y/N, I'm gonna have to leave you. Dumbledore will be wanting his....... Well, He'll be wanting to see me. Now, uh, your train leaves in 10 minutes. Here's your tickets. Stick to it. Twins that's very important. Stick to you tickets." Me and Harry both look at our tickets and were confused for a sec but then I thought why would the wizarding world have a normal train it has to be magic but Harry didn't pic that up. "Platform 9 3/4? But, Hagrid, there must be a mistake. this says platform 9 3/4. There's no suck thing, is there?" when harry asked that Hagrid was gone, and he just looked around but didn't see him. We walked to try and find the platform but couldn't find it and our train left soon so we went to platform 9 and 10 and asked one of the men where the platform was. I didn't think it was a good idea I thought he would think we are crazy and he thought we were only trying to be funny because there was not such thing as a platform 9 3/4 in this world. When the man left we heard a woman with ginger hair say "It's the same every year, packed with muggles, of course. Come on!" "Muggles?" I questioned but then remembered none magic people so we could follow them "Platform 9 3/4, this way" then harry realized why i wanted to follow the group of 6. 

"All right, Percy, you first." what looked to be like her oldest son Percy went first and ran through a wall i was shook same as harry we thought we were going mad and didn't believe it. "Fred you next" "He's not Fred, I am." said one twin "Honestly, woman. you call yourself our mother?" said the other twin "Oh, I'm sorry, George" the lady said pointing to the wall. When we got into spot he said "I'm only joking. I am Fred" I giggled a little as I could tell the difference now George had a slightly higher pitched voice. And with that he ran through the wall then his twin George went after him. when they did that Harry shook his head in disbelief but I didn't think much of it as it was obviously magic. "Excuse me." we said in unison "Could you tell us how to...?" "How to get onto the platform? Not to worry dears. It's Ron's first time to Hogwarts as well." One of her  other sons Ron nodded at me and harry then he blushed a little when he looked at me a bit closer and I saw it. I thought it was cute that he blushed when he looked at me I could tell we would be friends. "All you've got to do is walk straight at the wall between platforms 9 and 10." she continued "Best do it at a bit of a run if you're nervous." "Good luck." Her daughter said with a bit of a smile at me. She looked a year younger then me and harry so maybe she will be joining next year. Harry looked the wall up and down then started to jog I waited for him to be completely through then I waited a few seconds and went because I knew he would be in the way to look around. When I went through I was right he had just moved out of the way.

We looked around a little till we put our luggage where everyone that looked our age did and went onto the train into an empty carriage. We were on the train for a little while when it started moving we Ron came into the carriage we were in and asked if he could sit everywhere else was full, of course we let him in. He walked in and sat opposite me and harry. "I'm Ron, by the way. Ron Weasley." "Harry. Harry Potter and this is my sister Y" "Y/N. Y/N Potter" when we said our names Ron's Mouth dropped. "So so it's true! I mean, do you really have the...?" he asked pointing to he fore head and neck "The what?" harry asked not getting what he means "The scars?" when harry finally gets it he moves the hair out of the way of the scar on his forehead and i do the same with the one on my neck. "Wicked!" Ron said over joyed to be sitting with two celebrities. "Anything off the trolley dears?" asked a lady with a trolley full of Lolli's and sweets. "No, thanks. I'm all set." Ron exclaimed holding out a bag of squished sandwiches "We'll take the lot" my and harry say holding out a hand full of galleons "Wow" I thought Ron couldn't get any more amazed but it seems he keeps on getting more and more by the minute.

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