Chpater oen prouloge [ The first three words are spelled wrong. Great title ]
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. [ Oh my gosh. It's a black triangle! :O ]
A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright.
"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." [ Hmm, I wonder what that means. ]
"Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. [ You know, the point of describing them by their pelt at first is to make it a mystery who the cats are. ]
"she has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."
She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy.
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Sorry it was short but that is how darkrose or whoever wrote this, wrote it.
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