Chapter 21: 'STARCALN'

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Oh my goodness, you guys are killing me with your comments.

'A NOSE.  OH NOSE! '

'Swisscide? A death by Swiss cheese?'

'I too say "gigle" when there's a random "beautiful" cat nearby'

'OH NO NOT THE NOSE'

I literally was smiling like a weirdo while reading all of y'all's comments.

Anyway, on with the next chapter!

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[ Aww darn, no Author's Note. ]

"Oh no Broakcnstar!" [ Oh no, it's Broakcnstar. ]

yelled StarGleam mad;y I can;t be talkin to brokenStar!" And sheran away leaving AshFurt behin her.She run and ranned and runend [ You hear that guys? She ranenened ]

and then se was at StarClan[ I don't think that's how it works ]

"Yay Im not at the dark Fort anymro1! she thought happly and then she wasked across the broard and then she was in Starclan!1 [ Um, Starstar, I think they put you in the Dak Froset for a reason. ]

"Welcmon to Starcaln said YellowFangn she was stnding ther with LefPool, BrambleClan, SpottedLeaf and BakSrae. [ Oh look, it's Lefpool, the entire BrambleClan, Spottedleaf, and Baksrae ]

"Blakstar [ who the heck is Blakstar. I thought we saw BakSrae ]

yoyre not in the Dark FGort !" [ Yeah, he's in the Dak Froset. ]

Gleamstar yelled hellpy, she didnt want him to be their she lovd him after all. [ BLACKSTAR IS LIKE 20 MOONS OLDER THAN YOU. PLEASE DON'T. ]

"Of course not" BlackStar relipe. "wy would i be their I mean I luv tou after tll2!" [ Yeah, Thistleclaw loved someone who died before him and look where he ended up, in the dark forest. ]

"well thats tru" reoidned Gleamstar. "but I can't be in StarCan! Oalready came here once I cant do it agan!" [ Yes, yes you can. ]

"well it looks like you haf. said BlueStar and she said "but we cant send you back to the calns again, this time it locks like we'll have to REINCART YOU." [ WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT. WHO'S BRILLIANT IDEA WAS THAT. WAS IT YOURS SPOTTEDLEAF? YOU CAN'T STICK HER ON THE CLAN JUST BECAUSE YOU DON'T WANT TO DEAL WITH HER YOURSELF. ]

"Omh Reincartion!" [ She almost spelled it right. ]

yelled StarGam "you mean like what haopned to CinderPaw?" [ Noo, like what happened to Graystripe ]

"Yah" said CinderPelt comin yp to her "thast what happened t me I was reicnanrt." [ You heard that? Cinderpelt was reicnanrt. ]

She Said. [ OH MY GOODNESS. IT'S SPELLED CORRECTLY ]

"But it might be awhile" said SpottedPool "after all we have to figre out Ow were going do that firtsl}   [ No, bad Spottedleaf ]

"go do somethinm elese" [ Yeah, go away child while the grown-ups do smart grown-up stuff ]

"okay" siad GleamStar and she luf. She heard her namer being called and she turnd around and saw HawkForst standing over her body. [ Oh dear, here comes dramatic Hawkfrost ]

"StarPaw noooooooooooooooooooooo!1111!11111!1!11!111!" [ There he is. ]

je yowle. "Starcaln how ould you od this to me!" "We were about to get marti. [ Oh yeah, they were about to get marted ]

"Im sorry Hawk Frost" said StarGleam "I'll be back soon I think"! [ I think. ]

"Wat whose there?" HawkFrost looked around but hed idnt sieantyhing. [ Hawkfrost seems like the stupid one in the relationship. And that's saying something, since the other cat is Starstar. ]

"Its me GleamStar" said GleamStra looking at him.

"I cant see yo" he said and he buped into a tree. Then he fele down. [ A+ there Hawkfrost. ]

"bye HawkForst!" said StarGleam and she left cius she didn' want to see what would haben when her belocd HawkyForest wock up so she luf. [ Wow, you're a great mate, Starstar. ]

"hi their StarGlema" said a voice and GlemaGleam looked around. "Whose there!1!11!" she eked and it was... Falled leaf!1!111111!1!11111 [ Do not, I repeat, DO NOT fall in love with her Fallen Leaves. We have enough of an issue without you getting yourself in this mess ]

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Just to let y'all know, this will probably be my last update for the next couple weeks. I may update tomorrow or the next day, but that's only if I get the time and the want to do that.

~ Roxy

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