Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 [ Yes I can ]
StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the mos.
"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.
"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. [ You can't do that ]
"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.
But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11 [ Oh my gosh! It's so exciting it needs exclamation points AND ones ]
"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. [ It's just Blackstar... ] All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. [ Who is that and what have they done with ShadowClan ]
"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!" [ I don't think Sandstorm was that good of a fighter ]
StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. [ Spoiler Alert, it isn't ]
thnkx and ples no more flams
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Grammar Errors: 15, wait, no, 17
Spelling Errors: 43 [ And I thought it could only get better]
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