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We thank all who submitted action excerpts for consideration.

Criteria Used:

Excitement and Pacing: How thrilling and engaging is the action sequence? Does it have a suitable balance between fast-paced moments and moments of tension or breather?

Clarity: Is the action sequence easy to follow and understand? 

Originality: Does it offer a unique take on action or introduce new elements?

Cinematic Quality: Can you visualize the action sequence vividly? 

Emotional Impact: Does the action sequence evoke emotions in the reader? Does it create a sense of danger, triumph, fear, or any other strong emotional response?

Descriptive Language: How well does the author utilize descriptive language to enhance the action sequence? Does it create a vivid and immersive experience?


First Place

Unmasking The Nightmare by starStorm26

Second Place

Seret by Wabisabi_kn

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