Judge(s): OutOfMyImagination and kiwithv
FIRST PLACE: Chasing Eden by StellaRoseATX
Title: 4/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
First chapter: 4/5
Grammar, spelling, and punctuation: 15/15
Genre suitability: 5/5
Plot /Content: 7/10
Character development: 8/10
Writing flow: 10/10
Emotions: 8/10
Writing style: 10/10
Personal enjoyment: 8/10
Total: 89/100
Feedback: The story has a good flow, and the writing style is descriptive and enjoyable. Though the characters are very mafia troupe-like, I guess that comes with the book theme. The cover and blurb meet the book's theme and genre. Though I don't see much of a mafia aspect yet, apart from just mentioning it a few times.
SECOND PLACE: The Love I Found by LVann26
Title: 3/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
First chapter: 4/5
Grammar, spelling, and punctuation: 15/15
Genre suitability: 4/5
Plot /Content: 8/10
Character development: 7/10
Writing flow: 9/10
Emotions: 9/10
Writing style: 10/10
Personal enjoyment: 9/10
Total: 88/100
Feedback: The story seems polished and has a strong well-thought-out plot. The cover is lovely and meets the genre as well, though the title could be something more interesting.
Pick and Choose Me by KawaiiAeon
Title: 3/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
First chapter: 4/5
Grammar, spelling, and punctuation: 14/15
Genre suitability:5/5
Plot /Content: 8/10
Character development: 8/10
Writing flow: 10/10
Emotions: 8/10
Writing style: 9/10
Personal enjoyment: 9/10
Total: 88/100
Feedback: The cover looks amazing and tells about the story a lot, the blurb is also informative, though the book title is a bit cheesy. The story has a good flow and a wonderful writing style.
THIRD PLACE: Fate Interrupted by LNRoberts1
Title: 5/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 4/5
First chapter: 4/5
Grammar, spelling and punctuation: 14/15
Genre suitability: 5/5
Plot/Content: 8/10
Character development:7/10
Writing flow: 9/10
Emotions: 8/10
Writing style: 9/10
Personal enjoyment: 9/10
Total: 85/100
The title, without a doubt, is a very unique one and not repeated. "Fate Interrupted" in itself got me hooked to read the story further and even more so when I read its Blurb. The perfect amount of information is needed to start the story and get a reader hooked by the Blurb itself. The cover can be improved in some ways, the red text colour was a little off-putting. I love the way you have built up your characters, from their appearances to their personalities, everything is interesting. I couldn't stop reading it further and further until I realized I've got other books to read as well haha, definitely coming back to complete it! Plus point, the chapter titles impressed me a lot!
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