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The Corset [COMPLETE]

Romance

Control? Corsets? Manipulation? Lily has moved away from her family to find some new inspiration for a book she's trying to write in an empty neighborhood. She encounters her neighbor Theodore, who acts as if he's from the Victorian Era. He starts t...

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by PINKCHICARINA

by PINKCHICARINA

                                    
                                              
Hey guys!

So I was wondering what could make this book better? I would wanna add more chapters, but they have to be in flow of the story.
Some things to keep in mind:

- How is the pace of the story? Too fast? Too slow?
- Are the character's personalities vivid enough?
- What things were too obvious? Or not obvious enough? What can be done to fix it?
- what could make scenes that were boring more interesting? And how so? What scenes were boring?
- I'm always worried about the tone of the story? Is it okay?

Let me know! ;)



You can comment straight here to let me know, or you can message me privately, anything works. Thanks again!
And thank you for 34k reads! You guys are insane! Thank you so much!