Benefits in Sandwich Method

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This part will be about the benefits when you use the sandwich method when leaving a comment.

Example.

Good job of getting right into the action and dialogue. But get some narrative in there. Describe the surrounds, the characters, etc. Not a lot that you would go crazy. But enough to give us a sense of the place and time. Dialogue is the best way to tell a story, but you have to break it up a bit. You are a good writer.


This is a comment of an intermediate writer but how can you benefit from this? Try to read the sentence again like it was left in your work.

Some people would say "Hmm. I think I need to improve my work. But how? Hmm. I think I want to check his works so that I can get an idea on how to describe the surroundings."

If that happens, you hit a jackpot. Someone read your work. Keep up the good job.

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