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DARKO-

Ok so I'm just gonna do a general review.
first, I'd recommend to keep a general username. I tried to search for you but couldn't find you, thankfully I realized you were you!

Also, I think your covers are extremely artistic, but I say, stick with one.

Next, please pursue your obvious talent. It's amazing but it's not being fulfilled. Especially "Darling", for which I saw so much potential. You're amazing at hooking a reader from the first sentence, unfortunately you're also amazing at letting them down. I'll admit I was disappointed to see the lack of chapters, but the abundance of works. Don't bite off more than you can chew.

Your writing style is great no need for critic there, and very original, however I think you could appeal to a more general crowd by creating fiction that is somewhat more realistic. Please don't change your original works, but I'm just saying I'd love to see what you could do with a "River Phoenix Fic" or what "Darling" was going to be.

I want to see you as a writer who engaged in what you saw, rather than one who ignored their vision.

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