Skinships ▼ soonhoon [Under revision]

carat-deul

Hi. hello.

Mga bhe, okay eto na talaga.

Naisipan ko kasing i-revise yung story, not much, pero siguro may mag iiba? Napansin ko kasi, I observed the flow of the story and I find it lame. I'm unsatisfied myself.

I have the thought, the plot. But the thing is I don't know how to make jihoon a 'jihoon', how to make the characters like themselves in real life.

The reason why I wasnt updating for months is because I was confused. Should I do this? Or that? How do I make a character better?

So yea, I thought of revising/editing the story.

I hope you'd like the new version.

[/// SILVERCARAT ///]