So I have been looking through this book and I really think it has moved too fast, something big happens in every chapter so it's quite chaotic. I also think some chapters are really short so I need to make them longer.
I am going to try make the re-write more interesting and with a lot more chapters.
Lots of love,
OXO
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One Last Bite (completed)
Vampire"Don't you know it's bad to underestimate Vampires sweetie?" Ethan snarled "Ready?" I hear Grayson and my eyes drifted towards him "5... 4... 3... 2... 1... Run!" Once the word rolled off his tongue, my feet hammered against the ground and I d...
