Full Stops & Commas

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This is a pretty basic one, but people still forget it.

!! USE FULL STOPS AT THE END OF YOUR SENTENCES, AND USE COMMAS TO SEPARATE SECTIONS OF TEXT !!

It makes a story 100x more easy to comprehend.

E.G. Which is easier to read?
1-
"Sounds good, see you tomorrow, then."

She went to sleep.
The next day, she was in the park. She sat under a tree, sketching the scene.

2-
"Sounds good see you tomorrow then"

She went to sleep the next day she was in the park she sat under a tree sketching the scene

Which one was easier to understand?
Was it Option 1?

If, for some reason, you found it easier to understand Option 2, let me know why in the comments. I'm genuinely curious.

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