This story is my first one written, EVER! I'm sorry it's not very good well not really if you don't like it don't read it. Ok so this book is under heavy construction and there will be a lot of editing and re-edit. I'm open to constructive criticism. I would actually appreciate any input so I know what improvements I can make. So welcome to my story please leave a comment even if it's to say my story sucks. Just don't be too brutal.
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I will be rewriting this whole story. I don't like the pace and now that I kind of know what direction I'm going I have a lot of things to change.
The plot will still be the same but the story will be completely different. I want a faster pace and I feel like the story is dragging along. I'm sorry for the confusion it might cause just bare with me.
Actually, I don't suggest anyone reading this right now its really bad and I want to make it better to where I can enjoy writing those story.
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Badly Misunderstood
Roman pour AdolescentsHe's a good boy and I'm a bad girl. I should stay away but when I look at his eyes it's like looking into my soul. And for him, I will be the good girl, if only he will let me. *************** Olivia Watson wants nothing more than to steal the affe...
