Random Shizz That Will Confuse The Hell Outta You

Story idea (ish)

Wrote a short horror story with my b- I mean err... friend. 

I'll give a sample: 

Naomi still wasn't impressed by the idea of surgery… after all, the thought of being put to sleep made her feel vulnerable… what if IT came back? There would be no way to stop him.

Jake was looking at her, “He won't hurt you, I'll be right here during the whole procedure, nothing will happen I promise." He said smiling.

Naomi hesitantly nods at everyone as she came to the conclusion that arguing that a masked man who she saw in a one-off dream was planning to take her would not exactly be the best course of action. And like Jake said, they were going to look after her, weren't they?

The doctor then asked “So… are we going through with it?"

"I… guess so." She mutters, looking down at her legs stretched out in front of her.

She's taken to the operating theatre and holds Jakes hand as the surgeons prepare the general anaesthetic.

“Alright ma'am please relax and breathe calmly." they placed the mask over her face but before it went dark she saw a man standing in the corner of the room…

A masked man.

Soo... what do you guys think? Should I publish?

(check out the pic. Creepy cover? O_o)