feedback ?? pls ?? i just want to make u happy ??

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HI !!

so first of all, hope u like seventeen. does it suck? idk. up to you.

BUT

THAT'S PRETTY MUCH WHAT I'M HERE FOR

so, i see a lot of comments abt certain things u guys don't like to read (mostly the daddy thing. that was a real mixed bag that was)

SO

i'd really appreciate some feedback or suggestions. you guys can comment them here bc...yes.

so

here are the questions you guys can comment off of bc i'm lazy.

what are some things you don't like abt this story ?? maybe some things you'd like to have changed ??

things you want more of ?

things you like, but would like less of ?

what are some things you'd like to see happen ??

just plain old feedback about how i write or what i write or even chapter lengths.

i know that overtime chapter lengths have gotten kinda short, but it's just because i've gotten really busy with working and things. so i write as much as i can in my spare time. :)

xx, Aly.

honey // r. taylor *EDITING*Where stories live. Discover now