This oc is by DarkJewlTheNightWing
Name: Silver Shadow
Ooh never heard that name!
Tribe:icewing, nightwing, sandwing
OOFERS A MARY SUE yeeeeesh......
Gender: Female
Obviously
Powers: is a mind reader, and only breaths dry ice.
Hmm i think for a Mary Sue dragon you should only have one power because people would already be frustrated with a Mary Sue. (one of my tips)
Looks: She has deep purple eyes, Her scales are almost pure black with her underbelly being a grey, she has scales going down her neck that are a sandy desert color, but she also has spikes that are retractable on her spine and tail (which are the color blue)
YEAH THIS ONE A TRUE NATURED MARY SUE other wise k00l!
Personality: she is often confused for a cold hearted and disrespectful dragon, but once you get to know her she's calm and caring but overprotective if needed.
Yeah I get her....
Tips for Silver Shadow
•OK so first you should tone down with your Mary Sue, make it a hybrid at least?
• one power would make her more closer to a original character
•the sandwing part of her isn't hardly even there if I where going to fix her I'd just take away the sandwing part of her.
Ok so this one needs a couple of tips. She NEEDS to tone down her Mary Sue ALOT (well not that much *COUGH* *COUGH* allwings *COUGH* *COUGH*) but over all she's alright.
