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Brief Description: A girl gets "punished" by the God of Writing because she critiques the books where the main character is weak and remains oppressed by other characters. She gets transmigrated to the story she was cursing the MC and the author.
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I AM BACK WITH ANOTHER UBER LONG REVIEW. YES. IT'S LONGER THAN MY LAST ONE.
ANYWAY, SORRY FOR TAKING SO LONG. I MADE THIS AS IN-DEPTH AS POSSIBLE TO MAKE UP FOR THE TIME, THOUGH IT REMAINS TO BE SEEN IF IT'D BE HELPFUL OR ENTERTAINING.
IN ANY CASE, ENJOY.
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🐾 NON-SPOILER OVERVIEW 🐾 _______
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I have a few mixed feelings about this book. Overall, it's not very well written, and I don't feel connected to the characters and the world enough to make me want to stick around to see what happens next.
Grammar is horrendous (major headache), and I was left very confused by the time I finished the last chapter (Ch. 15 Taboo or what?) when writing this.
I can't really say I like the characters, and I think the plot is kind of all over the place.
I will say that it has some potential, though, and it can get pretty humourous at times.
However, for most of the novel, I was left confused and bored. Despite being one of the shorter books I had to read, it actually took me a while to sit and read through it all, and quite often, I had to take a break from reading after a paragraph or two.
The Mission is a sort of reincarnation/wuxia novel, which I am in no way familiar with, so that may have played a part in my confusion of the overall tone and direction. But the poor exposition and zero emotional struggle definitely doesn't help in establishing anything.
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