Broken Ever Afters by AdrianaGalea

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Quinn Hartley's life is a fairy tale

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Quinn Hartley's life is a fairy tale. She could want for nothing more in life. Or so she thought...until she discovers her friend's illness and nothing mattered anymore. The happily ever after she had hoped for now shattered and broken.

After a wondrous encounter with a fairy tale character, Quinn embarks on an enchanted journey to save her currently broken ever after. To what length is she willing to go to save her friend's life? Will the journey be able to change her mind about happily ever afters?

Page turning Broken Ever Afters is a hooking adventure worthy of a Grimm.

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Concept - Creativity, Ideas, Style: 5/5

Plot: 5/5

Tone - Characters, Language, Point Of Views: 5/4

Voice: 5/5

Spelling and Grammar - Punctuation, Editing: 10/8

Style: 10/9

Organization - Research: 5/5

Development - Plot, Tone, Characters: 5/4

Total: 50/45

Review/Comments by Judge: It's such an amazing and creative plot that I actually enjoyed reading it. However, you still need to advance your editing and detailing skills.

Congratulations to AdrianaGalea

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