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WELCOME TO THE FIRST YEAR OF NOVEL CONTEST 2019!
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Do you see your world the same way you see the glass?
Kiraki is your typical 17-year-old, hardly-done-by teenage wallflower, in her own mind at least. So you can imagine how well the news goes down when she's forced on a four week long vacation at a resort exclusively for Pro Heroes and their families.
Mae, on the other hand, casts a wide shadow. Her success at a young age, widening the gap between the two sisters. But could this trip, a gift for their 18th birthday, be the catalyst to mend their relationship?
Enter, Shoto Todoroki. Son of the worlds #1 Hero, eighteen, and sexy as hell. Unbeknownst to him, his father has ulterior motives for being there, but he didn't figure Shoto would find his first real reason to start living.
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Concept - Creativity, Ideas, Style: 5/4
Plot: 5/4
Tone - Characters, Language, Point Of Views: 5/4
Voice: 5/5
Spelling and Grammar - Punctuation, Editing: 10/8
Style: 10/8
Organization - Research: 5/5
Development - Plot, Tone, Characters: 5/4
Total: 50/42
Review/Comments by Judge: The overall plot is kind of common, but I love your style of writing and way of presenting your thoughts. Actually, besides the lack of creativity and language usage, I personally really enjoyed it.
