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WELCOME TO THE FIRST YEAR OF NOVEL CONTEST 2019!
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Robin Reece was always known as the shy girl, always with her nose buried into a book, transported to another world full of magic and wonder.
Adrian Wilson was always known as the football star of the school, always found on the field or with his large group of friends. He seemed to be the last person to want to escape from it all, in fact, he was never seen with a book in his hand.
One day after school, Robin comes across a telephone box with a pile of books.
This is where their story starts.
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Concept - Creativity, Ideas, Style: 5/4
Plot: 5/4
Tone - Characters, Language, Point Of Views: 5/4
Voice: 5/4
Spelling and Grammar - Punctuation, Editing: 10/8
Style: 10/9
Organization - Research: 5/4
Development - Plot, Tone, Characters: 5/4
Total: 50/41
Review/Comments by Judge: Very beautifully written, even if the plot is slightly common. The way everything is conveyed is beyond impressive. Every scene is perfectly described, with words that add up to the amazement of your writing style. But the original plot is very slow paced and needs to slightly speed up.
