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Lana's role in her organization is to understand and manipulate people, and she prides herself in that ability. When she learns the roots of her bastard heritage, she must complete her mission in Westeros before serving her half-sister, Daenerys Tageryen, in Meereen. Once in Westeros, Lana wants nothing more than to return to Meereen for Dany, certain that her role in life is to help her reclaim the throne.
After Lana completes her mission, she comes across trouble, and then The Hound. When he takes her captive for the bounty on her head, she quickly learns that he is one of the few that she can manipulate.
Her encounter with him will make her question everything.
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Concept - Creativity, Ideas, Style: 5/4
Plot: 5/5
Tone - Characters, Language, Point Of Views: 5/3
Voice: 5/5
Spelling and Grammar - Punctuation, Editing: 10/9
Style: 10/9
Organization - Research: 5/5
Development - Plot, Tone, Characters: 5/4
Total: 50/44
Review/Comments by Judge: Very interesting and appealing to the eyes, it really gets the reader's attention. However, a little improvement in the characters department is required, along with some minor editing.
