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"They had never looked so human in that one moment. They weren't on their phones, Snapchatting their lives for once. No, they were holding each other, running, screaming, crying. Suddenly, they weren't the stars of their own worlds, they were weeds awaiting the pesticides, dogs waiting to be put down. That's why Eren couldn't move. That's why Levi couldn't move either."
Eren Jaeger was an Invisible, a social reject who practically didn't exist. Marked absent for classes that he was the first one to show up for, a lack of friends, and only his art to express himself with, Eren was found by the boy who saved him, Levi Ackerman.
After a tragic event occurred within the pair's hometown, Eren decided to become heard and fight for humanity.
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Concept - Creativity, Ideas, Style: 5/4
Plot: 5/4
Tone - Characters, Language, Point Of Views: 5/3
Voice: 5/5
Spelling and Grammar - Punctuation, Editing: 10/8
Style: 10/8
Organization - Research: 5/5
Development - Plot, Tone, Characters: 5/4
Total: 50/41
Review/Comments by Judge: A too common plot yet still appealing to the reader. More detailing and expression is required otherwise good plot twists.
