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WELCOME TO THE FIRST YEAR OF NOVEL CONTEST 2019!
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❝ Glamour. Secrets. Death. ❞ Welcome to Beryl Haven.
In which silver spoons feed poison to its takers and serves it on golden platters.
The teenage elite of Beryl Haven are pure perfection, or at least they appear to be. But everyone knows you shouldn't believe what you see or trust what you hear, especially when it involves murder. Behind the layers of clothes, money, and makeup, there's a brewing storm that threatens to rip apart the very lies that hold Beryl Haven together.
And it starts with Lola Summers.
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Concept - Creativity, Ideas, Style: 5/5
Plot: 5/5
Tone - Characters, Language, Point Of Views: 5/4
Voice: 5/4
Spelling and Grammar - Punctuation, Editing: 10/8
Style: 10/9
Organization - Research: 5/4
Development - Plot, Tone, Characters: 5/4
Total: 50/43
Review/Comments by Judge: Besides a few grammar and sentence formation mistakes, the plot is very good. Your writing style grabs the reader's attention and the continuous easy flow of the story makes it all the more interesting to read.
