Solomon Pressman, a very talented young writer, has been given the opportunity to attend the prestigious Ouran Academy, free of charge.
Another story of a commoner mingling with the Elite, but this time it's a little different.
Before I post the next part, would you few readers I have be kind enough to give me your honest opinions about the story.
I just keep rereading it from the beginning and ughh.
Is there anything missing?
Is Solomon's personality inconsistent throughout the book? (I've been having trouble writing him, because I'm not used to writing characters with his rude and angry attitude)
Are there any huge plot holes?
Just what are y'alls honest opinion on how I can make the book better, before I move forward.
Love yall
Ps,
In case y'all haven't noticed, Solomon's character his inspired from this boy
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Like I literally have to think about Huey from the Boondocks (my son 🥰), whenever Solomon says or does anything
