Antarikssh | Telescope Tele Awards

📋Judging Criteria📋

✨FOR LONG STORIES /FS/FF/SS✨

Cover :/5
Title:/5
Blurb:/5
First Impression:/10
Plot:/10
Writing Style:/10
Language & Grammar:/10
Character Development:/10
Length of chapters:/5
Overall Impression:/20

Did the participant followed you?:/10
Total:/100

✨FOR OS/TS✨

Title:/5
Cover:/5
Blurb:/5
Plot:/5
Language and writing style:/10
Overall Impression:/10
Did the participant followed you?:/10
Total:/50

🌸Example🌸

✨FOR OS/TS/FS✨

Cover:2.5/5

It could have been better.One of the pic is even cropped.The cover neither have the name of One shot nor the writer.The pictures chosen perfectly complements the story .

Title :⅘

The title is unique and different.It surely reflects your story.

Blurb :⅗

The blurb only says that it's a xyz story and depicts how they meet but nothing more than that.You could have added some dialogue from the story so it could have become more interesting.

Plot :3/5

The plot is good.But there have been stories which depicts childhood friendships bloom into love .So , it's not unique but not that too common also.You can surely give it a read.I guess the idea was good and first to be written on xyz

Language andWritingStyle:8/10

A few grammatical mistakes I noticed which could surely be removed after editing.

Overall Impression:7.5/10

One and a half marks deducted for cover.One for blurb and the one for plot.I guess it could have been more expressive .Events were in perfect order.But as it was your first OS you did well.

Yes ,author followed me.10/10

Total:38/50

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✨FOR LONG STORY/SS✨

Cover :2.5/5

I guess the cover is a little messy.The name of the story is not clearly visible.It also doesn't have the name of author.The pictures chosen are good but it needs correct placement.

Title :⅘

The title is quite unique.I have never read a story with this name .So,good job .One mark deducted as it goes well with the starting phase of story where X and Y are there for each other but can't say about upcoming chapters.

Blurb:3.5/5

Blurb is good.It perfectly summarises the story.But you could have just described it a little more so that it becomes perfect.

First Impression:8/10

The first thing which I felt was that the presentation is not good.The storyline is nice.

Characters are well defined.

Plot:8.5/10

So,the plot is amazing.Very different from what I have been reading till now. Really unique concept .Plot development is also smooth neither too fast nor too slow.But just try to bring a little clarity.

Language and Grammar:6/10

There are grammatical mistakes.And such mistakes can't be ignored.You can just proofread it before publishing or go for an editing process.If Hindi is not your first language then you can go for English.The grammatical mistakes causes some sort of distraction.

Writing Style:6/10

You can just write dialogues in bold .It would make it look more presentable.And also just show when characters are delivering dialogue and when not.Otherwise I didn't find any other issue.One thing more avoid using short forms like instead of ‘ kyun ‘  ‘ q’.

Character Development:8/10

Character development is smooth.X’s love for materialistic things is clearly highlighted.Y's character is also well explained.The character traits are being expressed through actions that's really good.

Length of Chapters:3.5/5

The length is fine.But Try to write a little longer.

Overall Impression:14/20

On an overall basis the concept and thought is very good.There are grammatical errors which need to be corrected.The cover can be changed so that it looks more attractive.Just a bit of editing can make your story more good.

Yes,author followed me.10/10

Total:73/100

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SOME IMPORTANT POINTS
🌸If the participant has followed you then give full marks for "Did the participant follow you?: " .

🌸For OS/TS at the end the total score will be multiplied by two.So that it becomes equal to 100.

🌸 You must send your judgement before or on the deadline given.

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