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📜 Reviews by @Twink_ling_STAR📜

1)My saviour by RiaART

Cover:- ⅗ (In a need of new cover. The pictures were cropped and disarranged.)

Title:- ⅘ (The title was good though it could have been named other.)

Blurb:- 5/5 (Use of dialogues and lines making the curiosity to level up higher.)

First impression:- 9/10 (The first impression put up was really appreciative.)

Plot:- 9/10 (Plot of the story is unique in its own way.)

Writing style:- 8/10  (A little bit of improvement in writing style.)

Language and grammar:- 8/10 (Recheck o the book. Other than that, everything is perfect.)

Character development:- 10/10 (Putting up the characters is the most important thing and it was maintained very well here.)

Length of chapters:- 4/5

Overall Impression:- 17/20 (The overall impression was superb.)

Did the author followed you:- 10/10 yes!

Total:- 87/100
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2)Poisoned Love by @dishatripathi7

Cover: 5/5 (perfect cover, perfect pictures, perfect theme and background.)

Title: 5/5 (Title is according to the plot. Loved it)

Blurb: 5/5 (The blurb has a lot to increase the curiosity of minds.)

First impression: 10/10 (Just fascinating!)

Plot: 10/10 (The plot is unique and different as that of the show.)

Writing style: 9/10 (The way of writing is good.)

Language and grammar: 9/10  (Awesome! But just need a recheck.)

Character development: 10/10 (Characters put up are just fabulous.)

Length of chapters: ⅘ (A little bit short chapters but fine for reading.)

Overall Impression: 20/20 (This story is just amazing. I fell in love with it! Everything is so good, so nice!)

Did the author followed you: 10/10 yes!

Total: 97/100

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Love till eternity by SHAHIDAAkhtar7

C

over: ⅗ (needs a little improvement)

Title: ⅘ (suitable title. Wonderful!)

Blurb: ⅗ (could have been detailed)

First impression: 9/10 (the childhood start is really a good one.)

Plot: 9/10(a different storyline. Awesome!)

Writing style: 7/10(needs improvement)

Language and grammar: 6/10 (Needs improvement and a recheck.)

Character development: 9/10 (the characters are suitable.)

Length of chapters: ⅗ (Try writing little lengthy chapters)

Overall Impression: 17/20 (This one storyline is different. Seeing mishbir as childhood friends is different.)

Did the author followed you: 10/10 yes!

Total: 80/100

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Mishti's Letter by shamamafab

C

over: ⅗ (a different cover should be added)

Title: 5/5 (title is perfect as for the storyline)

Blurb: 5/5 (everything needed was given in the blurb. Superb!)

Plot: 5/5 (the plot was different and unique. Writing a letter while conveying your overpowering emotions. Nice plot!)

Language and writing style: ⅘ (fantastic!)

Overall Impression: 7/10 (everything was perfect but just a few changes are needed.)

Did the author followed you: 10/10 no!

Total: 40/50
=80/100
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