Title: striker smally
By: SAANVI005
Judge: the_lost_stories
Cover: 5/5
Very attractive cover, cover completely relates to the story.
Title: 5/5
Unique title, that completely suits the story line. Very catchy and creative.
Blurb: 4/5
The names of the football team creates curiosity.
Plot: 4/5
Plot is not too unique, but the writer has presented it very creatively.
Language & Writing style: 10/10
Writer has great command of the language. Writing style is also perfect, the writer has properly used the capital and italic fonts to grab the reader's attention whenever and wherever needed.
Overall impression: 9/10
Overall the OS was perfectly presented. Author has used full creativity to describe the emotions, characters and scenes in the story. Plot was not so unique but the writer's creativity has overpowered it.
Author followed: yes, 10/10
Total: 47/50
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Title: destiny aur dosti
By: shah_deshna
Judge: the_lost_stories
Cover: 5/5
Attractive cover and it suits the story.
Title: 4/5
Title is good, but can be made more unique.
Blurb: 2/5
For such a long book, the writer must have tried to describe the story a little more. Blurb is the very first thing that goes to the reader, so it must contain the gist of the story.
First impression: 9/10
Character, prologue and the chapter 1 worked for me. Working on the blurb will help you to catch more readers.
Plot: 8/10
The story is based on Chinese drama ‘love020’, but the writer has very creatively presented the story to make it unique.
Writing style: 9/10
Very clear and proper writing style. It does not create any misunderstanding when characters are chatting in real or game. I would only suggest you can also use italic fonts to their real life chats.
Language & grammar : 7/10
You need to work on the grammar part, as there are incorrect tenses and grammatical errors. Proof reading is also needed to remove typos.
Character development: 8/10
Character development goes pretty well as the story proceeds.
Length of chapter: 3/5
Very small chapters. The minimal length of the chapter must be around 1000- 1500 words.
Overall impression: 17/20
The story pretty well defines the friendship and love. The Writer could work on blurb to make readers more curious. chapters needed to be proofread to reduce grammatical errors.
Author followed: yes, 10/10
Total: 82/100
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Title: u r my life
By: @yana_in_music_world
Judge: the_lost_stories
Cover: 5/5
Beautiful cover, that goes with the story.
Title: 4/5
Very common title but it is good, it suits the plot.
Blurb: 2/5
Blurb only says that the story is a continuation of the show. It does not contain any other thing to make readers curious.
First impression: 8/10
Nicely presented, but the prologue would have made it more impressive and catchy.
Plot: 9/10
The book is continued from the show. But it has been creatively twisted and presented. I would just suggest to not shift the scenes in too hurry.
Writing style: 8/10
Too many lingos used, and the writer has used “…..” Instead of full stop.
Language & grammar : 7/10
Need to work on grammar. I would suggest giving english transactions of the hindi dialogues.
Character development: 9/10
Pretty well defined.
Length of chapter: 4/5
Length of the chapters are good, but I felt that they could be made a little longer.
Overall impression: 17/20
Overall the story is very interesting and is creatively present. Proofreading and editing can help to reduce typos and grammatical errors. Author can also add blurb to increase readers.
Author followed:Yes, 10/10
Total: 82/100
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Title: Light to her darkness
By: yana_in_music_world
Judge: the_lost_stories
Cover: 4/5
Cover is beautiful. but since the story shows the dark phase of nandini’s life, it can contain more elements.
Title:5/5
Title perfectly matches the plot and is very attractive and beautiful.
Blurb: 4/5
Blurb includes introduction of the characters,but to make it more attractive few dialogues or little more description can be used.
First impression: 9/10
For long stories,Character sketches always work for me, chapter 1 has created a curiosity to read more.
Plot: 9/10
Unique plot and creative story line. The story flows perfectly and smoothly
Writing style: 8/10
I would suggest to avoid using the short forms like ‘f9 for fine and r8 for right’. Too many “.....” used instead of full stop.
Language & grammar : 7/10
TheWriter needs to work on the grammar and proofreading is must to avoid typos. I would also suggest to provide english translation of the hindi dialogues.
Character development: 9/10
Characters are defined beautifully and are expressed nicely.
Length of chapter: 4/5
Length of the chapters are good, but I felt that they could be made a little longer.
Overall impression: 18/20
Story kept me hooked. It was a beautiful read. I would only suggest to work on the blurb and grammatical errors to make it more presentable.
Author followed:Yes,10/10
Total: 86/100
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