Okay, so this is every ones results in descending order. Remember, everyone is through to the second round because we've all collectively decided that one chapter really isn't enough for us to get a feel for your story, especially since so many of them were just prologues. So while these scores really don't count towards the competition, please bear them and all the comments we made in mind when thinking about what you are going to do in Round Two.
Anyway, here you have it.
Round One Standings
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Ghost
Spelling and Grammar (5): 4.6
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 10
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 20
Plot (30): 29.6
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9.7
Judges Vote (20): 19.6
Total: 93.5
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Survival
Spelling and Grammar (5): 3.6
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 13.6
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 16.8
Plot (30): 29.8
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 10
Judges Vote (20): 19
Total: 92.8
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Destati
Spelling and Grammar (5): 4.5
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 10.4
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 18.6
Plot (30): 30
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9.9
Judges Vote (20): 19
Total: 92.4
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In Cold Blood
Spelling and Grammar (5): 3.2
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 12.6
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 17.8
Plot (30): 29.6
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9.7
Judges Vote (20): 19.3
Total: 92.2
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Jack of All Trades
Spelling and Grammar (5): 4.2
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 12.3
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 19
Plot (30): 26.7
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9.3
Judges Vote (20): 19.7
Total: 91.2
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Semi Automatic ☯
Spelling and Grammar (5): 4.1
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 10.3
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 17.2
Plot (30): 28
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9.9
Judges Vote (20): 19.2
Total: 88.7
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The Circle
Spelling and Grammar (5): 4.3
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 9.8
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 18
Plot (30): 27.3
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 8.7
Judges Vote (20): 16.1
Total: 84.1
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✴ℴℎ, ℴℎ, ℴℎ, ⅈt's ℳαℊⅈc❣✴⋆KH/FF⋆
Spelling and Grammar (5): 4
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 12.6
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 15.3
Plot (30): 23
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9
Judges Vote (20): 18.8
Total: 82.7
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Super
Spelling and Grammar (5): 3
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 9.5
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 13.8
Plot (30): 23.3
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9.7
Judges Vote (20): 13.2
Total: 72.5
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The Shadow Empress
Spelling and Grammar (5): 4
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 8.8
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 16
Plot (30): 21.5
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9
Judges Vote (20): 12.8
Total: 72.1
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Fallout
Spelling and Grammar (5): 4
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 9.6
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 14.2
Plot (30): 21.2
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9.8
Judges Vote (20): 12.6
Total: 71.4
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ShinRa Electric Company
Spelling and Grammar (5): 3.3
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 9
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 11.7
Plot (30): 12.2
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9
Judges Vote (20): 10.8
Total: 56
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End of us all
Spelling and Grammar (5): 3.8
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 8.7
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 12
Plot (30): 12.3
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 8.7
Judges Vote (20): 8.1
Total: 53.6
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[Name] the Friendly Vampire
Spelling and Grammar (5): 2.3
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 8.3
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 10.8
Plot (30): 12.3
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 8.9
Judges Vote (20): 9.8
Total: 52.4
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Blackened Hearts
Spelling and Grammar (5): 2.3
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 6.7
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 9.2
Plot (30): 15.2
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 9.8
Judges Vote (20): 8.5
Total:51.7
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Butterfly Catchers
Spelling and Grammar (5): 3
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 9.3
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 9.3
Plot (30): 13.3
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 8.8
Judges Vote (20): 5.8
Total: 49.5
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{Name} The One With The Dragon
Spelling and Grammar (5): 2.2
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 8.3
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 7.8
Plot (30): 8.5
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 8
Judges Vote (20): 8
Total: 44.3
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This Little Light of Mine
Spelling and Grammar (5): 1.8
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 8.3
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc] (20): 7.3
Plot (30): 13
Fan Votes [should be the same for every judge] (10): 8
Judges Vote (20): 5.7
Total: 44.1
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'Best KH/FF/Others Story' Competition Judgment Book
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