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Final Verdict (Well there was only one judge sooooo)
Spelling and Grammar (5): 5
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 15
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc.] (20): 19
Plot (30): 29
Fan Votes (10): 9.8
Judges Vote (20): 19
Total: 96.8
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Spelling and Grammar (5): 5
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 15
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc.] (20): 19
Plot (30): 29
Fan Votes (10): 9.8
Judges Vote (20): 19
Total: 96.8
Additional Comments: Well, Miki, I see someone is competing with Liz over the longest chapter! But, in all seriousness, I just have to say damn. This chapter's really good! Though, when she questions Orion again, there was something about that that bothered me slightly. It wasn't that she was questioning him, that's normal I'm sure. It's just that she questions if it was really 800 years in the future. There's someone named Orion helping her who is apparently a Spark, she's in the middle of a desert it seems, in new clothes with the ability to walk, but she hasn't aged at all. Though I don't think that she'd really believe that she's 800 years ahead, how does she explain all this? I dunno, call it nitpicky, but, that's just how I feel about that situation. Anyway, I didn't really find anything wrong with this story. The characterization seemed great, though I'm not sure if I can say anything about House as I don't know him at all, though from what little tiny bit I've seen of him in commercials and the occasional channel surfing, he seems like the guy I've seen on TV. But, all in all, I've nothing more to say about this.
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'Best KH/FF/Others Story' Competition Judgment Book
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