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Final Verdict (Also just one judge)
Spelling and Grammar (5): 4
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15):13
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc.] (20): 19
Plot (30): 30
Fan Votes (10): ???
Judges Vote (20): 19
Total: 85/90= 94.4%
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Spelling and Grammar (5): 4
Character Portrayals and Story Canon (15): 13
Writing [Dialogue, description, etc.] (20): 19
Plot (30): 30
Fan Votes (10): ???
Judges Vote (20): 19
Total: 85/90= 94.4%
Additional Comments: Your prologue definitely caught my attention, but your first chapter for sure kept my attention. It's not that I never liked Seifer, but I just never really knew much about him or his personality and what not. From this chapter alone though I can already tell that I should've been reading some more stuff with this guy in it. I absolutely love how rural little [Name] has no idea what's happening in the world. Also, her dislike for lying and stuff. I dig it. Plus, I find it so interesting that Seifer is now using [Name]'s naiveness and her own dream to try and complete his own dream. I just think it'll be an interesting thing to play out. Can't wait to see where it goes!
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