Number of words: 1540
After editing over a year later: 1,765. U am a much better written than I was before. I am trying to edit most of these one shots, but I have a lot of other books that need to be edited too. Even though I have progressed, my writing from four months ago was not that great. By the way, I didn't edit the first part. Just after the song.
- October 3, 2022
Published: July 27, 2021
Song; Lost Boy by Ruth B.
This one is fluff with angst lyrics I guess. The lyrics in here don't describe Tommy's feelings
Wilbur is asking everyone to go to VC 2 since Tommy wasn't responding to his question about new lyrics even though he was wearing head phones
Wilbur plans on scaring Tommy by having event make so much noise that he'll not be able to ignore them
But they hear something before they can make any noise
And Tommy is 16
Also now that I am like halfway into the story I now realize that I am basically explaining my process and making a new parody as I go
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Wilbur's point of view*
I was about about to count down when I heard Tommy talking "Wait let's hear him" I said and smirked thinking of what Tommy would say to out himself
"Hmm let's see..."after he says that I hear a guitar strumming 'HE KNOWS HOW TO PLAY' I'm pretty sure everyone had a similar thought
"I live in a lonely world, yeah that sounds good" and he starts writing it down
"Wait that's stupid. What if I..." he starts writing down something else
"Why won't you listen to me
I'm trying my best
Why can't you help me succeed
I have to do this on my own" He sound amazing!!!"URGH THAT'S STUPID" Damn. And I thought I was hard on myself
"Hmmm...let's see what about
'Why do I have to be judged for his mistakes
Why do I have to go through this pain
Why do I have to do anythingI want to be on my own
I want to have a kid
I want to be with my lover
why can't you understand thatAm I as unimportant as your dead son
You haven't loved me since then' that's just stupid" he crinkled up another peice of paper and threw it in the trash"Why can't it be the same
The same as before
I wish you changed back
Changed back to who you wereMeh that's okay I guess" he has okay lyrics but he is really hard on himself
"NO I HAVE A BETTER IDEA" Tommy has mood swings
This time before he starts singing he gets his phone and I hear the BEEP for recording
"Please tell me
Please tell me
Tell me the truth
Why can't you tell meWe've been together
For five years" Dude he's amazing"Why can't you tell the truth
When did you lose feelings for me
When did you know I wasn't the oneWas this all fake
Why would you give me false hope
How could you do this to meI wish you had told me when we first met
I met met you when I was 13 and we started dating at 20 we are 25
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